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Junior Portfolio Showcase: Thomas McCluskey

Clear systems thinking, strong storytelling, and a portfolio that works — with room to sharpen its edge.

Thomas McCluskey is a recent graduate of NYU, with experience at CNN and BNY Mellon. He’s currently looking for a role, and overall, he brings something valuable to the table: the ability to take complex systems and make them understandable.

His portfolio is extremely simple. No flashy distractions. No unnecessary visual clutter. Just work, presented cleanly, with a clear focus on impact and clarity. And in many ways, that simplicity works in his favor.

Let’s break it down.

The Good

He tells complex stories with clarity

Thomas’ strongest case study is the BNY Mellon project, even though it’s password-protected due to NDA constraints (hint: have a look at his resume). Once accessed, it’s immediately clear what makes him valuable.

He leads with impact:

  • 9.5 billion daily transactions

  • 25% boost in user satisfaction

That’s how you open a case study.

Instead of drowning the reader in enterprise complexity, he distills a highly intricate payment tracking ecosystem into something understandable. The structure is tight. Headings are purposeful. The storytelling is focused. And visually, the case study supports the narrative rather than competing with it.

This is particularly important in enterprise or data-heavy contexts. It’s very easy to over-explain. Thomas doesn’t. He abstracts complexity without oversimplifying it.

The CNN case study reinforces that strength. Working on accessibility within an existing design system is inherently complex. Auditing, applying standards, navigating constraints — that requires structured thinking. And again, he demonstrates that he can go deep without getting lost.

There’s a systems mindset here. And that’s valuable.

He minimizes complexity — both in design and communication

Across both case studies, one thing stands out: Thomas doesn’t just design interfaces. He reduces friction in complicated environments.

At BNY, it’s transaction data and dashboards.

At CNN, it’s accessibility and design system governance.

In both cases, he shows:

  • Structured thinking

  • Comfort with ambiguity

  • An ability to communicate technical nuance clearly

The use of motion is a strong supporting element here. Many visuals are shown as screen recordings rather than static screenshots. That keeps engagement high and helps the reader understand flows rather than isolated UI fragments.

This is especially effective for data-heavy or interaction-driven interfaces.

He’s clearly comfortable operating inside complex systems. And that’s not a common strength.

The Potential

Range and positioning clarity

This is the most important point.

Right now, Thomas’ portfolio feels promising — but thin.

There are two case studies:

  • One locked behind a password

  • One publicly accessible

  • A third teased as “coming soon”

If you don’t have the password, you see one project.

If you do, you see two.

That’s likely not enough.

Hiring managers don’t evaluate in isolation. They compare. And when someone else shows three to four relevant, fully accessible case studies aligned with the role — that person usually wins.

The deeper issue isn’t just quantity. It’s positioning.

Is Thomas a:

  • Consumer-facing product designer?

  • Enterprise B2B systems designer?

  • Design systems specialist?

  • Data visualization designer?

Right now, the portfolio doesn’t make that choice clear.

If I’m hiring for a consumer product role, I might not see enough proof beyond the CNN case study.

If I’m hiring for enterprise B2B, I’ll like the BNY case study — but I’ll want to see more of that depth.

The teased MixMaster project looks more consumer-oriented, but without access, it doesn’t help him.

This creates friction.

In today’s market, “promising but unclear” often turns into a pass.

And this connects directly to the intro statement:

“Product designer crafting experiences shaped by research and empathy.”

This is neutral to the point of invisibility.

Research and empathy are baseline expectations. They don’t differentiate him.

Given what Thomas actually does well, the intro could lean into:

  • Systems thinking

  • Complex data environments

  • Enterprise workflows

  • Design systems

  • Translating technical complexity into clarity

That’s what makes him interesting.

When the portfolio is this minimal, every word carries weight. And right now, the opening doesn’t carry enough.

The polish is good — but not fully controlled

Thomas’ visual fundamentals are solid. Typography is clean. Color is restrained. The aesthetic direction is consistent.

But there are small polish inconsistencies that matter in tight hiring decisions.

Examples:

  • Some motion pieces autoplay, others use a standard video player.

  • Some visuals are placed inside device mockups, others are not.

  • The CNN case study alternates between styled and unstyled presentation.

  • A Zoom screenshot with blurred faces feels unfinished compared to the rest of the visual language.

  • The motion page shows only two pieces, which makes the layout feel sparse rather than curated.

None of these are major flaws.

But hiring decisions at the margin are often about cohesion and intention.

When presentation choices feel inconsistent, it subtly signals that the final 10% wasn’t fully considered. And that final 10% is often what separates “very good” from “exceptional.”

The work is good. The fundamentals are there. Tightening these presentation decisions would elevate the perceived seniority.

The Verdict

Thomas has real strengths:

  • Strong systems thinking

  • Comfort in complex environments

  • Clear storytelling

  • Solid data visualization skills

  • Good visual foundations

His BNY case study, in particular, proves he can operate in serious, enterprise-grade contexts.

What he needs now is:

  1. Clear positioning

  2. One more strong, fully accessible case study

  3. Sharper differentiation in his intro

  4. Tighter presentation consistency

If he doubles down on a direction — especially enterprise systems, data-heavy platforms, or complex internal tooling — he could be very compelling in that space.

Right now, he’s on that edge where he needs the benefit of the doubt.

With clearer positioning and one more strong project, he moves from “interesting” to “confident hire.”

And that difference matters.

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Florian Boelter is a product designer, mentor and builder focussed on helping early-career designers navigate the job search and the first steps on the job.

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